Friday, February 28, 2014

As a Teacher, How Do I Carve a Masterpiece out of THIS?


            Before beginning the long process of creating a master work, Michelangelo (the sculptor, not the turtle) would have the block of stone in question placed in such a way that light from the dawning sun would strike it.  He would then examine the stone carefully, trying to discern any cracks, flaws or shadows within the stone that would indicate that it wouldn’t be up to the quality required to stand up to years of chiseling and polishing.  After all, it would be beyond frustrating if he committed to working the block only to realize too late that the arm that he intended to carve was destined to crack off. 

"In every block of marble I see a statue as plain as though it stood before me, shaped and perfect in attitude and action. I have only to hew away the rough walls that imprison the lovely apparition to reveal it to the other eyes as mine see it."—Michelangelo

Sources suggest that he spent two years carving his Pieta and three years carving his David, which wouldn’t include the additional time required to buff and polish the stone.  Michelangelo later fielded questions about David’s unusual stance by stating that the huge block of stone, some eighteen feet tall, had been considered worthless because a fellow by the name of Simone da Fiesole had previously carved a big hole through the bottom of it, but Michelangelo had found a way to overcome the defect.
This is how masterpieces are made, by starting with quality materials, through careful preparation, and occasionally, with some defect removal.

In many respects, being a teacher is similar.
Before I get too far into summing up my lifetime of teaching observations, I should probably share some of my background.  I have been teaching high school students, in several different ways, for about 39 years.  The first day that I faced a class from the front of the room was as a senior in high school.  Our choir director was out with major surgery, and for some reason he felt that I was up to the daily task of replacing him for five weeks.  And so, with several different substitute teachers standing patiently in the back of the room over the five week period, I was an unofficial and unique member of the professional teaching community.
All teachers love teaching, which might seem like an observation so simple as to be irrelevant, but true moments of teaching, of being able to speak seriously and be heard seriously, are few and far between.  We want to make a positive difference in our students’ lives.  The average day is somewhat of a cacophony of sound and action, lecture and reaction about whatever the curriculum declares is important for that year, but there are moments when the machinery of education stops and the process of learning is allowed to take place.  From my probably unique perspective, education is summed up by the grade at the end of the semester, whereas learning is what happens when a thought, an idea, a perspective or a fact becomes part of the conscious database of the student.  Learning is about acquiring units that link, relate, and build.  Education today is too often about flood, flush and refill, as in “Re-teach me what’s on the upcoming test and you’ll have my attention.”  A colleague of mine in the high school English department nearly lost her mind last year when she had a classroom full of 9th graders who couldn’t identify a noun.
Education has gone from, “Feed me, Seymour!” (a reference sure to be lost upon all of the younger readers.  It’s from Little Shop of Horrors) to “Why can’t we just watch the movie?!” (an intense desire by many current students to avoid the process of genuine reading altogether). 
Way back when, when I was a student and we rode dinosaurs to school, traveling uphill both ways, we were expected to learn.  There was no such thing as a Scantron, and the old-school teachers gave out tests with fill-in-the-blank questions with no word bank.  If you were lucky, you might get a science test that was multiple guess, but that was just a gesture to keep the terms from being overwhelming.  Now that’s not to say that there weren’t some terrible teachers.  I recall one fellow who taught Mythology who passed out the books on the first day along with a list of assignments that covered the entire semester.  He then read his paper every day in class while we decided whether we were interested in being self-taught or not, but he was the anomaly, not the norm.
The modern student seems to have grown up with an uncanny ability to process small bites of information quickly, which can be impressive, but in far too many cases this ability is tied to a sort of auto-flush of the CPU, turning their minds into PU if asked for information after the test has been passed and the information mentally discarded.  As a teacher joke in order to make a point that they should try to use their long-term memories, I occasionally tell them that I’m passing out a previous vocabulary test that they’ve already had, instead of the one they just finished studying for.  The almost universal looks of panic tell me everything that I need to know about whether they learn for mastery or just process for the test in question. 
Back in the early 70s our minds might’ve been eight-track technology, but my head is FULL of eight track tapes, arranged like a library.  It’s true that as time progresses it’s harder and harder to get to the back of the library and find information I’ve almost never needed, but my students seem to have a single DVD in their heads, which they keep re-recording over, time after time and test after test.  Although they receive good grades, without re-teaching, their recall is often horrendous and seemingly getting worse with each passing year.  And as for their collective powers of observation, I find myself saying, “I’ve hidden that information in this room where no one will ever find it – in three inch letters!” far too often. 
The attention span of a goldfish is allegedly three seconds, and their memory span about three months.  Normally, these statistics would seem to have nothing to do with teaching, but with each passing year, my students and goldfish seem to have more and more in common.
            A few years ago, I came up against a situation that I had never experienced before.  I’ve been teaching mostly 10th graders ever since joining the high school staff way back in 1994.  One of the terms that I always cover at the beginning of the school year in 10th grade Literature and Composition 1 is the word “vicarious.”  For about fifteen years I was able to make the point that none of my students had ever seen a 6’ paramecium, and that viewing a slide or a video of one was an example of a vicarious experience.  I didn’t have to explain that a paramecium was a single-celled organism that propelled itself through water by the use of a single hair known as a flagella.  My classes knew what I was talking about and they focused upon the lesson, which was concerning the vicarious experience. 
            That eye-opening year, NO ONE knew what a paramecium was!  It was only in my third section of 10th graders at the end of the day that I found anyone who knew what I was talking about.  A further discussion revealed that single-celled organisms including the paramecium were covered in the 9th grade science curriculum, at least that’s what one student thought.
            I was giving a lesson that contained information that I had learned as a science student over thirty-five years ago, and I had reached a point in my teaching career where my students couldn’t collectively remember what they had learned from a mere three months prior!
            Hello Goldfish!
            It was then that I started to notice that my students were quite adept at test-taking, and they could temporarily master pretty much anything that they were given time to study, but when asked to share what they knew without re-teaching or re-learning, their knowledge was pathetically lacking.  Just the other day, I had a number of students who thought it a bit unfair that as part of a test on vocabulary and grammar that they had lost points for not capitalizing the words of a business title because that information hadn’t been recently re-taught!
            While sitting quietly attentive in one education seminar after another, I can’t help but roll my metaphoric eyes each and every time I hear the word “mastery” thrown out into the air.  The truth is, our students aren’t achieving long-term mastery, and so using the word to imply that since the student passed a quiz that they have mastered the material is just a sick joke of cosmic proportion, as evidenced by the momentary outrage at not remembering one of the basic rules of capitalization from the last example, which they were probably taught in third grade.
            An additional problem that has made achieving mastery unlikely is the fact that more than half of my students will now openly admit that they avoid reading whenever possible.  They don’t read for pleasure, and because of this, their vocabularies are limited, their sentence structures are infantile, and their spelling is unbelievably atrocious.  Even basic terms that one would pick up from reading the most elementary fairy tale are misunderstood.  While answering a question for a recent Ben Hur quiz in my Film and Literature class, far too many students couldn’t identify what a spear was.  They thought it was a sword, a stick, or a pointy pole.  During a quiz on the movie Maverick, one student asked what a stagecoach was.
            In an effort to make clear to my 10th graders just where their reading capabilities register, I have them read an eighth grade level version of The Three Musketeers, complete with bigger type, illustrations, large margins, and a text reduced to 300 pages from the original 700+ pages. 
            Before we begin, I pass out the following handout.

            We will be reading the abridged edition of The Three Musketeers in class.  The original story is around 700 pages long and we will be reading a version that is only 302 pages long, is written on a 8th grade level, and has large type and illustrations.  You will be reading in class each day and having a brief (ten questions - 100 point) quiz over the previous day’s reading at the beginning of each class period.
             We will be doing this for several reasons. 
             In my many years of teaching, I have learned that there is a vast difference between mastering school and mastering specific abilities, like reading.  For a person who doesn’t like to read, mastering school would include: watching the movie about the book (no movie actually covers the original story accurately), reading Spark Notes or Cliff’s Notes (which would be confusing because it would have MORE information than what is in our text) only listening to a teacher’s recap of the reading and not doing the initial reading required (there will be no recap before the simple one to two word answer fill-in-the-blank quizzes each day) and getting information from friends or the Internet (which won’t work because my classes are the only classes reading this particular book and the Internet will provide too much information). 
             Although I hope that everyone will find the reading simple and have no challenges, if this class turns out to be like previous classes, approximately 20-30% of you will find that you read much like a scanner – remembering a few pages that you have just read but quickly forgetting what had happened in the chapters that had come before.  I feel that it is important for you to realize if you have this tendency so that you can work to overcome it, since extended comprehension will be absolutely required on important tests in high school, on college work, and in your future work environment. 
             In addition, if you find it difficult to finish 30 pages of an 8th grade book during a fifty+ minute class period, then you should realize that you need to do more independent reading to increase your proficiency, because in the future, major reading tests seem to be moving towards setting a specific time limit for both reading and comprehending material.
             As for answering questions on the quiz, you must learn to discern the difference between important information and general information, since testing trends are moving towards having multiple, technically correct answers to pick from.  Here is a brief story to illustrate the point.  If a fellow got into a motorcycle accident and twisted his ankle, broke his kneecap, and was decapitated, what would be the proper answer to the question, “What happened to the motorcyclist?”  Obviously his dying would be the only relevant answer, the other two choices being essentially meaningless by comparison, although they would technically be true.
             I hope that this clears up any confusion as to why I feel that this process is important and helpful to you as a student.
             Sincerely,
                        Mr. P.

            It is not uncommon for half of my students to be unable to identify the king and the cardinal as the main political rivals in France after reading the first thirty pages of the story.  More and more of my students remember the last page or so of information, but are seemingly incapable of recalling a story of any real length.  I try to bring these problems to their attention, short of having their inabilities cripple their grade in my class, all the while hoping that they’ll get the idea and try to be more capable students before they run the risk of being kicked out of college during their freshman year for being educationally incompetent. 
            They shake their heads when I make my little speeches, but since their overall grade doesn’t really suffer, I have to wonder if their bobble-heading is really sincere.
            My Film and Literature class was watching Gone With the Wind on DVD with subtitles.  Doctor Meade had just completed explaining what Rhett Butler was doing for the South during the war. 
            I stopped the film and said, “Pop quiz.  How does Rhett Butler become rich during the war?”
            Cricket, cricket.
            Not a single student could answer the question.  Rather than spoon feed yet another crop of mental goldfish what they needed to know on the upcoming quiz, I closed by saying, “Well, good luck.  Doctor Meade just explained how Rhett made his money and that question is definitely on the quiz.”
            I feel like I’m handing a crutch to a person with two good legs when I have to stop everything and put information into brains that simply aren’t listening, or caring.  I know how newspapers and the like enjoy pet-naming generations.  I would be tempted to name the current generation of scholars “Generation tXt?”  Their big, sad eyes when they receive a failing grade are easily as cute as any that I’ve ever seen over the last four decades of my teaching career, but they spend far too much time perfecting their excuses and their puppy-dog expressions, and far too little time mastering their lessons for a lifetime of use.    
            When society is selling selfishness and personal gain over all other considerations in nearly every movie, cable show, tabloid headline, and newspaper article, then where is one to turn to find genuine character?  Once upon a time, the assumption would be the church pulpit, but that is no longer true.  The pulpit has far too often become a place of selfishness, judgment, and disgrace, every bit as sad as the headlines at the checkout stand at the supermarket.
            As for our leaders in education, they are preoccupied in the political business of education, and not in making sure that students genuinely learn.  It is enough to make it appear that they are learning. 
            Back in the 70s, there were two kinds of students, those who cared about learning, and those who didn’t.  Those who cared succeeded, and those who didn’t care were pressured until they at least complied, even if they didn’t buy into the idea that it was all for their own good.
            Today’s students are aware that if they aren’t successful, there will be consequences on several levels.  The superintendent wants to declare the glory of the district, and so there are pressures on the teachers.  The teachers want to declare the success of their students, and so they are forced, one way or another, to teach to the test.  The students want to pass the tests and get the scholarship money, and so they cram, filling their temporary memory with everything that they need at that moment to succeed.
            With all of these gears turning and meshing in synchronicity, few seem to notice that what had been assumed mastered last week has somehow become forgotten knowledge this week.
            The test was passed, so the student was pleased.
            The class was passed, so the parent was pleased.
            The standardized test was passed, so the teacher is pleased.
            The district scored above the norm, so the administration is pleased, and yet this system is mostly illusion and built upon feet of clay.  No wonder colleges are complaining that their freshmen arrive woefully unprepared.  It’s not accurate to say that they weren’t given the skills required to succeed when they entered college.  It’s more accurate to say that the goldfish didn’t make the mental space to retain all that they’d been exposed to, so they are more like a single DVD that has been overwritten hundreds of time, as opposed to a library of DVDs containing impressive stores of knowledge. 
            The problem is how to make this point to people emotionally invested into a system that APPEARS to be working?
            I went to my principal once to get his feedback on something I was thinking about trying.  I was considering putting extra credit questions on my English tests relating to things that my 10th graders had supposedly already learned in math, social studies, and science in 9th grade.  Instead of seeing this as a way of promoting long-term learning and holistic education, he informed me that it would be inappropriate for me to do this because I wasn’t teaching my students in those subjects.
            Yesterday, I “corrected” several dozen worksheets relating to answering questions pertaining to the DC graphic novel Kingdom Come.  I use this novel with my 10th graders for a number of reasons, not the least of which is because the story is set in the future of the DC universe where all of the “old” heroes have given up on society and its fickleness and the heroes have essentially disappeared.  The story shows a new generation of super-powered “children” who are slowly tearing up the world.  They are oblivious to the fact that they lack direction, common sense, and personal integrity.  They have no idea how to be a hero, which is why the old heroes have to come back out of retirement and teach them.
            As I checked the short answer responses a thought occurred to me.
            What if I were to mark an answer wrong because it wasn’t a complete sentence, or because it had misspelled words, or because it had parts that were undecipherable due to atrocious handwriting?     
            The majority of my students would then score quite poorly.
            I would be making my point about the quality of their skills and the knowledge that they haven’t acquired along the way, and I would also be establishing a precedent where almost no one in my required class would get an “A.”   If I graded this way, I would soon find myself on the computer or on the phone with complaining parents telling me that I was being too harsh, and then the principal would no doubt call me down to his office in order to give me a pep talk about how I could improve MY teaching.
            This whole house of cards is going to come crashing down someday, and everyone is going to be standing around with their fingers scratching their heads, saying, “How did we get here?” and “Why did this happen?”  The other civilized countries of the world are just going to shrug and chuckle behind their hands while the American “scholars” of tomorrow scream that it isn’t fair that the world is so hard, and that they can’t find a decent, high-paying job. 
            Today, it is likely that the students will attempt to do what they are told, but like goldfish, many have no feet, no solid skill base, so learning for mastery is really out of the question, and so we adjust our curriculum accordingly and process them through. 
            They may be impressive at blowing bubbles in unison, though, especially if all of their Ipods are playing the same song.
And like the faults in Michelangelo’s block of stone, how are things like under-motivation, disinterest, exhaustion from staying up all night with video games and cable TV, mental deficiencies like those found in drug babies, selfishness, and a general lack of personal integrity removed or overcome to produce a masterwork in the classroom?
Michelangelo had it easy.  He’d just say, “I’m not working with that block!  It’s got too many faults!” 
            Although I love a challenge, for as a senior in high school I convinced the principal to allow me to design, manufacture and paint a set of scenic drops for our production of The Sound of Music that worked out to 3/4s the square footage of the Sistine Chapel, there have been far too many instances in the last couple of years when I’ve stared at my students and quietly asked myself –

“God, how do I carve a masterpiece out of this?”

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